{"id":124,"date":"2018-10-26T17:40:33","date_gmt":"2018-10-26T17:40:33","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.freestyleacademy.rocks\/~SydneyT\/?page_id=124"},"modified":"2018-10-26T17:40:33","modified_gmt":"2018-10-26T17:40:33","slug":"poetry-intention-statement","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/freestyleacademy.rocks\/~SydneyT\/poetry-intention-statement\/","title":{"rendered":"Poetry Intention Statement"},"content":{"rendered":"<figure id=\"attachment_125\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-125\" style=\"width: 229px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\" wp-image-125\" src=\"https:\/\/www.freestyleacademy.rocks\/~SydneyT\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/10\/Screen-Shot-2018-10-26-at-10.36.23-AM-300x224.jpg\" alt=\"Water bottles that are all filled a small amount with a blue liquid, hung on a wire. \" width=\"229\" height=\"171\" srcset=\"https:\/\/freestyleacademy.rocks\/~SydneyT\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/10\/Screen-Shot-2018-10-26-at-10.36.23-AM-300x224.jpg 300w, https:\/\/freestyleacademy.rocks\/~SydneyT\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/10\/Screen-Shot-2018-10-26-at-10.36.23-AM-768x573.jpg 768w, https:\/\/freestyleacademy.rocks\/~SydneyT\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/10\/Screen-Shot-2018-10-26-at-10.36.23-AM-1024x764.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/freestyleacademy.rocks\/~SydneyT\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/10\/Screen-Shot-2018-10-26-at-10.36.23-AM-720x537.jpg 720w, https:\/\/freestyleacademy.rocks\/~SydneyT\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/10\/Screen-Shot-2018-10-26-at-10.36.23-AM.jpg 1158w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 229px) 100vw, 229px\" \/><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-125\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">The piece of art &#8220;It Seemed a Beautiful Day&#8221; by Tony Feher. This is the piece that I chose to respond to in my ekphrastic poem.<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><strong>Out of Tragedy, Comes Hope. <\/strong><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">What seemed so perfect,<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">so blue and bright<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">would be crashed down to the ground<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">destroying that even, perfect line<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">and creating this broken, <\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u00a0 place,<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">where chaos and destruction become hope.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">And we unite to recreate that line<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">which will never be perfect again.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">But has strung together these opposing sides<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">to create a line more powerful and new.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Although we are now joyous from connections<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">we won&#8217;t forget the line, <\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">that was once straight and blue.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Ekphrastic Poem Intention Statement<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">In \u201cOut of Tragedy, Comes Hope.\u201d I am the exploring the feeling of \u201csaudade\u201d through the experience of destruction. Saudade is a Portuguese word that has no direct translation in English. Simply, it means the love that remains after something or someone is gone, the feeling of sadness from an experience with memories connected to it, but also the happiness from experiencing the feeling. In this poem, the narrator could be anyone, it could be me or the person who is reading it. The narrator of the poem is responding to the concept statement through telling a story. They talk about how after destroying something, all of that becomes something better. There is a bittersweet feeling that is commonly associated with destroying something familiar to create something new. The subject of the poem is the art piece, the water bottles filled with the blue liquid. The attitude is originally sad towards the subject because the straight line of water was destroyed, but then they are happy about the new meaning of a more crooked line. The image of the straight blue line referencing the water bottles in general is a metaphor for something that has been created. That holds a lot of power and symbolism and means a lot to people, so that when it is destroyed, it evokes strong feelings. I broke the lines up and made \u201cplace\u201d its own line, because that is the point where the mood shifts from more of a sad tone to a happier tone. Then in the last few lines I rhymed \u201cnew\u201d and \u201cblue\u201d and also had the phrases look similar so that they could be connected. I did this so that the poem could come to a nice sounding end, and also so that it could go full circle. <\/span><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Out of Tragedy, Comes Hope. What seemed so perfect, so blue and bright would be crashed down to the ground destroying that even, perfect line and creating this broken, \u00a0 place, where chaos and destruction become hope. And we unite to recreate that line which will never be perfect again. 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