HI this is me and my friends story that made the flash vid in the animation part of this site.

 

This mountain has always been dreary (our main character says as he lights a cigarette. Our main character is doing his usual late night drive home down the dark cold Sunset Ridge a mountain he has been closely attached to since his childhood. Ever since he was young racing down this hill was his passion but now since he has never had any real competition he quit racing and now only drives
Down this mountain out of pure nostalgia) Ugh I guess I should get going.(he throws out his cigarette and proceeds to put the keys to the ignition. As he’s driving down he notices a pair of headlights rapidly approaching him.) what the hell!?(The car screams past him and all he can see is the guy waving at him as he turns the corner.)Thinks he got the best of me. HMPH, ill show him.(he
Accelerates shifting in and out of gears to catch up to this strange driver.)HA! there he is, I guess he's not that fast after all(smirk, he pulls to the side of the car to get a good look at who’s driving. Its to dark to see the face of this mysterious driver but his grin as he speeds passed our main character once again.)Oh so you wanna race (grin) Lets go then. the two cars screech down the mountain
Road neck and neck (the main character gains in the straight away but loses ground in the corners) "what is he thinking this guy is crazy you need to slowdown or you are dead on this upcoming turn" he thinks to himself. well it doesn’t matter because I will pass him at the next turn no matter what happens.(our character shifts and speeds up to match his opponent) (fade out to the other side of the turn) the two cars blaze around the corners with the main character
on the out side but suddenly he pulls in to the inner line forcing the other driver to slow down "ha now I have you phantom driver you cant beat me next up is a long straight away and its over from there" he thinks to himself. suddenly he remembers that there is a small turn to at the end of this one he slows down to compensate but it is too late he begins to spin out as he dose the other driver in a great show of skill passes him(show a heal tow technique in the other drivers car) as the other driver leaves our main character gets out of his car. He pulls out a cigarette and lights it " just who the hell is that racer. And how did he know my mountain better then me? i guess there is only one way to find out got to race him again" as he says that the words game over appear on the screen (zooms out to our character in a gaming machine he looks to his right to see who he raced and to his amazement sees a small kid sitting next to him. our character sits back in his chare and smiles "shit I just lost to a kid o well guess I still got a lot to learn when it comes to racing" he looks again at the kid with the big smile on his face "hay good race" he says the kid looks at him "ya it was fun hope we can do it again sometime." the kid responds "ya me too" our character say as he gets up and leaves out the door (fade to black) "it really was fun!"