WELCOME TO THE EPIC SENIOR NARRATIVE OF YOURS TRULY NATE RANDOLPH!
PITCH: There is this group of friends and they are all anticipating their camping trip. They are all fooling around while they are packing and getting the tents ready, there’s this one nerdy kid that they all make fun of. They get to the campsite and all get their stuff and get ready to set up camp, the nerdy kid goes back into the car because he forgot his retainer, as he looks for his retainer in the car he hears the radio station “BREAKING NEW PHYSCO ON THE LOOSE IN THE WOODS”. The nerdy kid freaks out and tells all his friends but they dont listen they just say he is imagining stuff. While all his friends are getting rowdy he notices footsteps but its just a squirrel, as they all get into there own tents and ready for bed, the nerdy kid hears actual footsteps getting closer and closer, he gets out of his tent to look for the murderer and as the murderer is about to stab his friend the friend awakes, he knocks the muderer out with a mallet and the friend group respects the nerdy kid.
Logline: A friend group goes on a normal camping trip, the nerdy kid who gets made fun of is the only one that knows there is a murder on the loose in the same campground they are staying at. No one believes him but they will!! when he knocks the murderer out in cold blood right before his friend was going to get murdered.
Murderer on the loose
Remi, Jack, Barry, and Thomas are 16 year old high school friends, who are going on a camping trip over the weekend to Lil Basin. They are currently driving to the campsite, Remi is in the back of the car with Barry and all his friends are being rowdy and he’s being picked on. When they stop at a gas station for snacks, Remi stays in the car because he sees some menacing guys in front of the gas station, while Jack, Barry, and Thomas go into the gas station he overhears the radio station saying there is an escaped murderer on the loose in Lil Basin. When Remi’s friends come back he tries to tell them what he heard and he is pleading to go home but his friends call him paranoid and convince him that nothing is going to happen and he is overreacting as usual. They get to the campsite and start setting up their tent, Remi goes to pee in the trees and he sees an orange jumpsuit in the distance and freaks out, trying to tell his friends but they don’t believe him. His friends check it out and find nothing there, further proving how paranoid Remi is. Then, they go on a hike. While they are hiking Remi sees a cool plant and inspects it, while he is doing that Barry convinces Jack and Thomas to hide in a bush and scare him, although Thomas is hesitant to do so. Remi looks back and starts to become panicky and scared when he doesn’t see his friends. He walks up the trail looking for them, when they jump out and scare him. The way Barry, Thomas, and Jack make fun of his paranoia and show him what little danger there is makes Remi stop believing in himself and he starts to ignore sounds that were scaring him before. They are getting ready to sleep for the night, when they are all settled, Remi can’t sleep so he wakes up and makes a peanut butter and jelly sandwich. While Remi is making his PB&J the audience sees the murderer walk into the tent (privileged position). He finishes making his sandwich, he is eating his sandwich while walking into the tent with the peanut butter jar and knife. He’s confronted by the murderer in the tent who is about to stab Barry, Remi screams, everyone wakes up and screams, Remi drops the sandwich then stabs the murderer with the knife. The murderer is incapicitated while Remi is standing there like a hero. Thomas and Jack are huddled in the corner looking at Remi in awe. In the morning the group is driving home, this time Remi is in the passenger seat of the car. They stop for gas. Jack, Barry, and Thomas are hesitant to get out of the car, so Remi goes in himself. Remi struts towards the gas station with a newfound confidence.
